Gosh I would much rather Just Dislike Kent Parson but you are doing a thoroughly good job of making him a HUMAN who gets to be FLAWED and have FIGHTS WITH PEOPLE and say AWFUL THINGS without them being THE END OF THE WORLD or EVERYTHING OVER FOREVER.
And yesssssss to Bitty carefully picking himself apart, and up, and putting himself back together into a human he wants to be, and choosing to be alive, and guh the body language and, yes, THAT KISS.
RIDICULOUS TYPO-FLAVOURED NITPICKS, PLEASE FEEL ENTIRELY FREE TO IGNORE: - "Jack actually comes down to the Georgia for the Fourth of July" has an extra "the" before Georgia I think? - I susect you want peremptorily not pre-emptorily?
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Date: 2016-04-17 12:03 pm (UTC)And yesssssss to Bitty carefully picking himself apart, and up, and putting himself back together into a human he wants to be, and choosing to be alive, and guh the body language and, yes, THAT KISS.
RIDICULOUS TYPO-FLAVOURED NITPICKS, PLEASE FEEL ENTIRELY FREE TO IGNORE:
- "Jack actually comes down to the Georgia for the Fourth of July" has an extra "the" before Georgia I think?
- I susect you want peremptorily not pre-emptorily?